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Editorial First read this Teaching poetry in secondary schools is going through a difficult time at the moment. As Barbara Bleiman explains on page 40, there are several reasons for this: teachers’ anxiety about assessment so that poetry-for-exams has come to dominate all poetry teaching; Senior Leaders requiring direct evidence of learning in every lesson; and the heavy focus on the teaching of knowledge by Ofsted, England’s school inspection service. Barbara writes; “This has led... to over-teaching poetry, to a reliance on formulae such as PEE (Point, Evidence, Explanation). It’s led to a focus on teaching specific information and ideas about particular individual poems rather than about poems more generally and how they work”. The result of this approach can be seen on page 19 in Molly Naylor’s experience of facilitating poetry writing: “I was tasked with helping thirty 14-year-olds write poems on the theme of the First World War. ‘So, what makes a good poem?’ I asked them as an opener. I was met with sighs, eye rolls and blank faces. Eventually a student stuck their hand up. ‘Fronted adverbials?’ t hey said.” As editors of Magma 85, working in secondary schools for years in various roles, we believe that love of poetry risks being stifled in schools. In many schools, enjoyment of poems is squeezed out by learning facts about them rather than understanding that they express important feelings in memorable ways. This functional approach applies to teaching other English texts and its effect is already evident. Between 2017 and 2021 the number of students taking English A Level declined by 23 per cent and between 2012 and 2021 the number applying to take English degrees fell by over a third. We risk becoming a nation in which love of literature, especially poetry, is perhaps discovered by some adults later in life, if at all. Molly Naylor and Barbara Bleiman describe other ways of teaching poetry that help it to be alive and enjoyable for students, as does the account of teaching an E E Cummings poem on page 80. Beyond this, we believe poems taught in schools should be more varied and inclusive. The GCSE Boards are making their poetry anthologies significantly more diverse, but at a time when poets are experimenting much more than previously we feel poetry in Key Stages 3 to 5 should include a much wider range of forms – prose poems, specular poems, erasure and sound poems, etc, etc, as well as the traditional forms exemplified by the Romantic period and required by GCSE. As usual, Magma 85 includes a wide range of poetic forms. In our view all the poems in Magma 85 would be good to teach in schools and we’ve included suggestions for teaching approaches for some of them on pages 88 to 90. The poems are grouped by the broad topics used in the GCSE anthologies. We’ve focussed on secondary schools because of concerns arising from our own experience and because Magma publishes poems for adults. An issue on poems for primary schools would be lovely, but would be very different. In the end we stand by Virginia Woolf’s great image, quoted by Barbara Bleiman, that reading poetry is, or should be, like being attacked by a horde of rebels. This may sound violent, but it’s infinitely better than the numbing deadness of focussing (and being required by Senior Leaders and Ofsted to focus) on teaching students primarily to identify technical features like fronted adverbials. Technical features are essential – one can’t discuss a text without them – but responding to the feelings expressed by a poem needs to come first. Without this, the poem is dead on the page. Ashley Hickson-Lovence, Laurie Smith and Gill Ward 5
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Contents Regular Features Competition Inspired Malika Booker responds to Jean Binta Breeze and Dennis Scott Selected Alison Binney 27 68 Close Reading Selina Rodrigues reviews Cecilia Knapp 91 Chloe Elliott reviews Helen Quah, 93 Michaela Coplen and Nóra Blascsók Maia Elsner reviews Nathalie Diaz, 96 Sandeep Parmar and Susannah Evans Thembe Mvula reviews Arji Manuelpillai, 99 Jay Gao and James Conor Patterson The Articles Rapping in My School Assembly. Molly Naylor on how poetry comes alive 18 Opening the Poetry Door – 40 Letting in the Hordes. Barbara Bleiman on how poetry teaching needs to change Exploring a poem – one way of doing it. Laurie Smith sits in on a lesson 80 Ideas for teaching/ways into 88 some of the poems 6 Magma’s 2022 Open Poetry 51 Pamphlet Competition The Poems Power and conflict (1) A rose by any other name? 8 Marvin Thompson Monumental 9 Jane Houston Interview 10 David P. Miller Again. Routine Check. 12 Shaniqua Benjamin Forgotten Ones 13 Shaniqua Benjamin Flight 13 Eleanor J. Vale it’s 1994 & this brown girl thinks she smells like teen spirit 14 Janine Bradbury First Haircut 15 Lara Frankena Arming the flock 15 Eleanor J Vale Application Denied 16 Graham Clifford FORM DS-160: PROVIDED SECURITY QUESTION OPTIONS 17 Wen Lim Power and conflict (2) I have a terrible secret Harriet Truscott 21 The Jaguar Escapes Leeds City Museum 22 Moira Garland Remember, Joan, You’re Only a Saint After You Die 23 Lucy Fenton Speaking for herself 24 Paul Francis In The End 25 Ciara Earley You are not like them 26 Anneliese Amoah Eating Emotions 26 Janina Aza Karpinska Time and place (1) Coastal Property 31 Rhys Owain Williams Swansea Clings to the Edge 32 Rhys Owain Williams Raging Guilt 33 Andrea Shavick Five Degrees 34 Julian Bishop Villa Nil 35 Michael Greavey Caliban to Miranda 35 Aaron Lembo Between 36 Eoghan Totten Christine 37 Isabella Mead Papyrus 38 Isabella Mead

Editorial

First read this Teaching poetry in secondary schools is going through a difficult time at the moment. As Barbara Bleiman explains on page 40, there are several reasons for this: teachers’ anxiety about assessment so that poetry-for-exams has come to dominate all poetry teaching; Senior Leaders requiring direct evidence of learning in every lesson; and the heavy focus on the teaching of knowledge by Ofsted, England’s school inspection service. Barbara writes; “This has led... to over-teaching poetry, to a reliance on formulae such as PEE (Point, Evidence, Explanation). It’s led to a focus on teaching specific information and ideas about particular individual poems rather than about poems more generally and how they work”.

The result of this approach can be seen on page 19 in Molly Naylor’s experience of facilitating poetry writing: “I was tasked with helping thirty 14-year-olds write poems on the theme of the First World War. ‘So, what makes a good poem?’ I asked them as an opener. I was met with sighs, eye rolls and blank faces. Eventually a student stuck their hand up. ‘Fronted adverbials?’ t hey said.”

As editors of Magma 85, working in secondary schools for years in various roles, we believe that love of poetry risks being stifled in schools. In many schools, enjoyment of poems is squeezed out by learning facts about them rather than understanding that they express important feelings in memorable ways. This functional approach applies to teaching other English texts and its effect is already evident. Between 2017 and 2021 the number of students taking English A Level declined by 23 per cent and between 2012 and 2021 the number applying to take English degrees fell by over a third. We risk becoming a nation in which love of literature, especially poetry, is perhaps discovered by some adults later in life, if at all.

Molly Naylor and Barbara Bleiman describe other ways of teaching poetry that help it to be alive and enjoyable for students, as does the account of teaching an E E Cummings poem on page 80.

Beyond this, we believe poems taught in schools should be more varied and inclusive. The GCSE Boards are making their poetry anthologies significantly more diverse, but at a time when poets are experimenting much more than previously we feel poetry in Key Stages 3 to 5 should include a much wider range of forms – prose poems, specular poems, erasure and sound poems, etc, etc, as well as the traditional forms exemplified by the Romantic period and required by GCSE. As usual, Magma 85 includes a wide range of poetic forms.

In our view all the poems in Magma 85 would be good to teach in schools and we’ve included suggestions for teaching approaches for some of them on pages 88 to 90. The poems are grouped by the broad topics used in the GCSE anthologies.

We’ve focussed on secondary schools because of concerns arising from our own experience and because Magma publishes poems for adults. An issue on poems for primary schools would be lovely, but would be very different.

In the end we stand by Virginia Woolf’s great image, quoted by Barbara Bleiman, that reading poetry is, or should be, like being attacked by a horde of rebels. This may sound violent, but it’s infinitely better than the numbing deadness of focussing (and being required by Senior Leaders and Ofsted to focus) on teaching students primarily to identify technical features like fronted adverbials. Technical features are essential – one can’t discuss a text without them – but responding to the feelings expressed by a poem needs to come first. Without this, the poem is dead on the page.

Ashley Hickson-Lovence, Laurie Smith and Gill Ward

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